You need a recommendation letter from your former university teacher. Write a letter to your teacher: • Give him the reasons for asking for the recommendation letter. • Give him/her details about your personal and academic background that can be added to your letter. • Tell him/ her about your future plans

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Dear Thomas , I hope you and your family are in good spirits and doing well. My name is Amandeep and I am one of your prior students in the course Global Business Management in section A. I want to recall you that I was the only student who achieved 100 out of 100 in your course and for the appreciation you gave me for your favourite book.

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time I need your help. Actually, I am thinking to pursue a master's degree in economics. I was asked to provide a recommendation letter from the previous teacher with whom I did my

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course. With

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letter, I can easily secure my seat unless it would be difficult to get admissions that are privileged institutes. I hope that you never let me disappoint.

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, please mention my educational background and

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my criminal background . I would really appreciate you for

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letter and wait for

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to get as soon as possible as the

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date for

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is 8 December 2022. Yours sincerely, Aman

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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