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Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what can be done to reduce it?

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In the present, there is a huge amount of people dramatically emigrating from
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rural
areas
 to modern cities, leading to the overload of public facilities usage. In
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reasons and solutions
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remarkable
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 increase in emigration. The
first
 reason is the unbalanced distribution of work. As you know, most
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 industrial
areas
 have
intention
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the intention
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 to locate near necessary resources, especially: residential
areas
, trading markets and rivers. Unfortunately, most of them are flocked
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 the cities; so, people who crave
for
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receiving a high
number of
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salary or changing
career
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 have to move to urban
areas
. The
next
 one, the countryside doesn’t have enough conveniences as the city. Specifically, in the capital
center
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, the system of public transportation is at
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 rate rather than the remote one because of the agility of catching vehicles.
Therefore
, there are waves of emigrant coming to the city with the purpose
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 their families to have
chance
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 to utilize these public services. To deal with
this
 trouble, the government should set up several benefit packages, which encourage
business
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 established in the countryside to create jobs for rural
dweller
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.
In addition
, the authority had better upgrade the road system and attract the industrial
areas
 to relocate, which help to transport
product
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 in and out easily. To sum up, the transformation of
portion
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 between dweller in the countryside and urban
areas
 have extraordinary changes, it is on alert. Indeed, the support of the government is essential for easing
this
 situation.
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