Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what can be done to reduce it?

In the present, there is a huge amount of people dramatically emigrating from

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rural

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to modern cities, leading to the overload of public facilities usage. In

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reasons and solutions

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increase in emigration. The

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reason is the unbalanced distribution of work. As you know, most

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industrial

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to locate near necessary resources, especially: residential

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, trading markets and rivers. Unfortunately, most of them are flocked

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the cities; so, people who crave

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receiving a high

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salary or changing

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have to move to urban

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one, the countryside doesn’t have enough conveniences as the city. Specifically, in the capital

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, the system of public transportation is at

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rate rather than the remote one because of the agility of catching vehicles.

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, there are waves of emigrant coming to the city with the purpose

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their families to have

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to utilize these public services. To deal with

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trouble, the government should set up several benefit packages, which encourage

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established in the countryside to create jobs for rural

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, the authority had better upgrade the road system and attract the industrial

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to relocate, which help to transport

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in and out easily. To sum up, the transformation of

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between dweller in the countryside and urban

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have extraordinary changes, it is on alert. Indeed, the support of the government is essential for easing

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situation.