Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficulty. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, both the destitute and the wealthy find the
difficulty
to study in educational institutions. In my point of view, I totally agree that studying these days is too sophisticated for both the poor and the rich humans. Replace the word
difficult
This
topic will examine the agreement with the topic and two arguments will be given.
On the one hand, destitute people, who are not smart enough to earn a scholarship, have trouble with tuition fees because the education cost at top universities is increasing every day. Therefore
, poor individuals are forced to start an educational institution they are not huge fans of regardless of their wishes. Namely, tuition fees at top universities today are about fifty thousand dollars per year. Thus
, needy humans are not able to pay.
On the other hand
, wealthy people are able to pay more than fifty thousand dollars per year and money is not a problem for them at all. However
, almost all universities have essential entry examinations and they could be complex due to
the high demands on students. Consequently
, riches would not support wealthy humans to start their dream educational institutions. For instance
, Harvard University has a multitude of assignments candidates are forced to submit before the application form will be checked by the workers of Harvard University.
To sum up
, riches could be helpful to start many academies, nevertheless
, deep knowledge is a mandatory part of any educational process and the lack of knowledge will make
a number of troubles for the candidate to get higher education.Verb problem
cause
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