Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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people

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think that the biggest environmental

problem

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today is the

loss

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of particular

species

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of animals and

plants

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,

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others believe that we have problems that are more important than that.

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essay discusses

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people

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who think that the main

problem

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is

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the

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loss

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of some

species

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of

plants

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and animals,

then

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about

people

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who think that we have another environmental

problem

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and

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i

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will give my opinion.

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, we have a

loss

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of some animal

species

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like white tigers, brown bears,

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chickens. A

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from NASA that was made in 2011 shows that the population

each

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of

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species

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had declined

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68%. Some

species

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of

plants

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like Horsetails, Ferns and Liverworts are in

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danger too. A

study

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from NASA in 2014 shows that the population of Horsetails and Liverworts decreased

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78% and the population of Ferns went down

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91%. But today we have a solution

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that

problem

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.

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created houses

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is

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called Reserves.

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some kind of

places

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where is no human. A

study

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from TUM which was made in 2019 shows that some

species

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of animals and

plants

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increased

for

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13%.

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also

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think that we have problems that are more important

that

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than

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the

loss

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of

species

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. One

problem

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is the

pollution

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which is created because of garbage and some factories. A

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from Oxford shows that the number of deaths

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pollution

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increased from 23% to 67%. Another environmental

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is changing seasons. Every year seasons started to be

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stronger like summer or winter. A

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from Oxford shows that the average temperature in summer in 2010 was 26

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degree

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and in 10 years it grew to 38

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degree

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winter went down from 10

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to -8

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degree

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in the same period.

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kind of

changing

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can be a

problem

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for

environment

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the environment

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and

people

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. in conclusion,

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think that problems with the

loss

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of

species

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not

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so important rather than

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problem

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problems

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with changing

season

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seasons

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or

the

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apply

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pollution

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, because there are no

solution

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solutions

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for

pollution

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or

changable

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changing

seasons.