Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.
When it comes to children's
behaviours
, a group of people believe rewards are perfect to give when children make good deeds while on the other hand
, others think that punishment can be given to kids
who conduct bad behaviours
. In this
essay, I will discuss how gifts are a good option as an encouragement for keeping the noble personality whilst getting them punished for wrongdoing is not always the right option for parents
.
To begin
with, pupils are easily happy and satisfied with presents, hence
to hand them rewards for acting positively can be beneficial. Firstly
, they oftentimes have no idea if their behaviour is positive or negative, so gifts can signal them that they do the right thing, thus
encouraging them to do more of it in the future. However
, presents should be kept simple in order to avoid turning their orientation to the other direction when behaving well. For instance
, they can be rewarded with chocolate or ice cream instead
of expensive electronic devices when they help their parents
with domestic chores.
On the other side, when their behaviours
are going south, punishment is not suitable to warn and give them lessons because sometimes parents
are not aware that they punish their children so hard to the extent it becomes traumatic and has the potential to damage the little's mental health. Instead
of learning from their past mistakes, they can turn to be rebellious outside the house and lash out at their friends at school or in other circumstances such
as hitting other kids
since they are always punished when doing so at home. As an alternative, parents
can communicate their way through words so the little ones can fully understand the things they can or can not do.
In conclusion, despite the importance of making kids
aware of their behaviours
, the action should be made subtle so that it will not change the kids
' intention when behaving positively and jeopardize their mental well-being which can trigger worse gestures instead
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