It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The diagram illustrates the production of electricity with the use of solar energy in the panels.
This
method is valuable for domestic purposes. The structure of the solar plate shows top most transparent layer in the form of a box. Two
water
pipes are attached, one is used as an inlet
pipe
, and the other as an outlet
water
pipe
for air passage in the lower box. Sun rays strike the top-most transparent layer. contrastingly, cool air enters through the inlet
pipe
in the panel. The heat is generated in the
water
pipes with the sun's rays, While cool air strikes the
water
pipe
to generate energy and moves towards the outer exhaust. Energy produces by the collision of sun rays with
water
in the
water
pipes,
then
saved in the form of electricity. In
this
process, panels help to produce electricity. Show quoted text
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