The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that

crime

is increasing at an alarming rate in modern society, and some people believe

government

should limit violence in

movies

and dramas. In my opinion,

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strongly disagree with

this

suggestion, because the violence in TV production is not the main reason causing

crime

, the

government

should put their effort into addressing other rationales

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crime

. On the one hand, if

government

strictly ban violent behaviour in

movies

and TV, it will actually cause some

problems

.

First

of all, the freedom and creativity of directors will be threatened by

this

regulation, and

movies

might be not interesting and attractive because of it.

For example

, in China, the

government

has strict regulations about the movie industry,

thus

the subjects of Chinese

movies

are monotonous and unable to win any international film awards.

In addition

,

movies

and television with some violent factors that might happen in reality make

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aware of the challenges that we are facing in society.

For example

, a Korean called hope is telling

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story that a little girl being sexually assaulted by an adult, and

this

movie lets the public realize the importance of sexual education to children and

also

helped Korea improve its law about teenage protection.

On the other hand

, the

government

should endeavour to solve more important crises that are the underlying reasons for

crime

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poverty and illiteracy. If these two

problems

didn't tackle and become more serious in the future the

crime

rate will continuously increase.

Government

should prioritise solving these two

problems

and take some actions like providing more job opportunities and equal access to education for everyone. In

this

way, with

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productive and well-educated public, fewer people will choose to commit a

crime

, and the situation will be improved a lot. In conclusion, watching comedies does not transform someone into a comedian and watching violence doesn't directly make someone a criminal. I believe

instead

of controlling the development of the film and TV industry, the

government

should try its best to tackle poverty and

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education

problems

.