The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that

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is increasing at an alarming rate in modern society, and some people believe

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should limit violence in

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and dramas. In my opinion,

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strongly disagree with

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suggestion, because the violence in TV production is not the main reason causing

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, the

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should put their effort into addressing other rationales

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crime

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. On the one hand, if

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strictly ban violent behaviour in

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and TV, it will actually cause some

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of all, the freedom and creativity of directors will be threatened by

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regulation, and

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might be not interesting and attractive because of it.

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, in China, the

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has strict regulations about the movie industry,

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the subjects of Chinese

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are monotonous and unable to win any international film awards.

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,

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and television with some violent factors that might happen in reality make

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aware of the challenges that we are facing in society.

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, a Korean called hope is telling

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story that a little girl being sexually assaulted by an adult, and

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movie lets the public realize the importance of sexual education to children and

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helped Korea improve its law about teenage protection.

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, the

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should endeavour to solve more important crises that are the underlying reasons for

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crime

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a crime

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which

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poverty and illiteracy. If these two

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didn't tackle and become more serious in the future the

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rate will continuously increase.

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should prioritise solving these two

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and take some actions like providing more job opportunities and equal access to education for everyone. In

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way, with

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productive and well-educated public, fewer people will choose to commit a

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, and the situation will be improved a lot. In conclusion, watching comedies does not transform someone into a comedian and watching violence doesn't directly make someone a criminal. I believe

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of controlling the development of the film and TV industry, the

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should try its best to tackle poverty and

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education

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.