what is your statement of purpose for graduate school

I knew that the human heart fascinated me in many ways. In my formative years, my grandmother who later died practically lived on certain pills that she said in our local language “
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good for the heart”.
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inspired me to ask questions. Are there no drugs to remodel an ailing heart into a healthy one,
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that there would be no need to keep taking medications? My incessant questions got no answers. I
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decided to embark on a journey to better understand the physiology underlying the cardiovascular
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. The program, integrative physiology will aid my comprehension of the cardiovascular
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. All through practice, I was keen on handling cases related to it. I found out
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, salt intake, obesity and morbid states like diabetes were implicated in the pathogenesis of essential and secondary
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pushed me to discover the role of the central nervous
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(sympathetic) in the regulation of the cardiovascular
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, considering their effects on blood vessels. I have
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chosen to apply for
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program with a focus on cardiovascular physiology. My research interests best align with the study of neural control of the circulatory
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which synchs with work being done at the laboratory of Prof. Qing-Hui Chen. I would be glad to discover neural mechanisms involved in the sympathetic activation of these metabolic disorders and to find out whether there are modifications within autonomic neurons in the hypothalamus in the development of congestive heart failure and salt-sensitive
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under his tutelage. My interest can be traced right from my preclinical years, where I enjoyed lectures on Membranes and Receptors, Cell Biology and Genetics. Off the laboratory, I participated in community outreaches, measuring vital signs. As a president of the Medical Students’ Association, I educated the public on
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and diabetes and their sequelae.
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, I introduced a quarterly cardiovascular screening program that encompassed both curative and preventive measures aimed at managing
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ailments.
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, my dissertation in the final year was focused on obstetric cases admitted at the intensive care unit of Ho Teaching Hospital. Interestingly, more than 60% of
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cases stemmed from uncontrolled cardiovascular conditions. In my line of work, time spent at
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/diabetes clinic improved my understanding of the associated risk factors, from modifiable to non-modifiable. I attended workshops on anti-hypertensives and their effects on the autonomic neural
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. I believe my dreams of being a great researcher shortly after school and my long-term goal of becoming a scientist in the industry will come to fruition upon being enrolled. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to receiving the good news of my admission to your prestigious institution.

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