Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two dissimilar viewpoints about advertising, the

first

group reckons that advertising has been

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one of the most crucial factors in making more profits for businesses,

however

, the other section of the world's population looks at advertisements as a usual thing which does not have any attractions for consumers. And I firmly follow the initial view, and in my point of view, well-known companies and businesses are able to keep running more than unknown ones.

To begin

with, the success of companies is a combination of elements

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its crucial part is

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advertisement

, due to

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plethora of customers that it brings for them.

For instance

, the

first

branch of the KFC chain fast-food restaurants had been opened in Kentucky rural area which was not a big name at all,

furthermore

, it was on the edge of bankruptcy because of its limited users.

Therefore

, in spite of the horrible financial circumstance they were in, the manager got heavy loans from American banks for payments of advertising on all platforms,

such

as billboards, TV shows, newspapers etc,

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it has paid them off and it is obvious that the KFC brand is one of the most popular restaurants all over the world. While there are a bunch of brands around the world which have come up successfully due to efficient advertisements, the idea that argues advertising is time and finance-wasting and can not attract individuals to brands has still existed because they are not aware of modern and eclectic methods of advertising, like the quality of services or goods of a business which is the most reliable type of advertisements. As an example, there is a supermarket in my

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, whereas it has never printed or uploaded advertising in social media or newspapers, all the dwellers purchase their needs from there, due to its positive reputation that has been spread in our place, and in my opinion, it is his costless

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which it the supermarket did not have high-quality goods, it would not earn a large amount of money and profits. In conclusion,

although

an

advertisement

has adherents and opponents, I believe that even the

second

group knows that no business should run without high-quality services, which is the most useful way of advertising, they just do not agree that it is an

advertisement

.