Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is an ever-increase in the use of
technology
. There is a contentious argument over whether or not modern
technology
is beneficial for mankind.
Although
many think that
technology
has a bad impact on our
lives
, I firmly believe that its pros are more significant than its cons.
This
essay will not shed light on both perceptions but
also
my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion.
To begin
with, cutting-edge
technology
has become a big part of our
lives
to the point where
people
can not imagine life without it.
This
is because
people
say that it is taking control over their
lives
. To elucidate
further
, if
people
indulge themselves in
technology
, there will be almost no physical interaction with other
people
which can lead to adverse ramifications.
For instance
, a recent study has shown that the 90% of
population
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in the USA use mobile phones as a platform to connect with
people
which
as a result
affects their confidence level.
On the other hand
, society claims that
technology
particularly the internet has more advantages than disadvantages. Due to
this
modern
technology
people
's
lives
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become convenient. They can buy things at the touch of a button and gain access to information from all over the world.
Moreover
,
technology
has
play
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a crucial role in schools. Education is now easier than before due to
advance
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technology
and every child has access to it. To illustrate, students were able to study at home during Covid due to the
technology
. In conclusion, according to my perspective,
technology
have more positive points and if
people
use it to improve the world
instead
of overusing it, it can be a good development.
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