Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

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There is no denying that using of
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social networks especially,
Facebook
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has increased by
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. For
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reason, many
people
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claim that social
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sites
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cause several negative situations not only personally but
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community
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the community
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sites
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are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local societies.
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with, thanks to social
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,
people
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have many advantages.
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, countless
people
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who live in different countries can have a chance to contact others.
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, after contacting, jobs can be found effortlessly because of the extensive network.
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, several social groups can be created by the person in order to discuss and share their common interest.
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,
people
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can find solutions to their problems, thanks to
Facebook
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groups.
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, the effect that
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and other social
media
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networking
sites
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have had on societies and local communities can only be seen as negative. Unexperienced
people
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who do not know to use effectively
Facebook
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can be taken to the cleaners by swindlers.
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situation damages not only individuals but
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a victim has family, they can be affected.
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, most
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started to be addicted in order to find new friends. Until they meet someone, they waste their hours. In conclusion, even though online social
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sites
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have brought individuals closer together, they have not had the same effect on society or local communities. In
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should not spend their time on
Facebook
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as much as possible because of above the negative reasons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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