Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people indicate that holding

sports

competitions may cause many complications ,while others suggest that

its

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just a game.For me I advocate the

first

opinion ,we will discuss both points of view in the below paragraphs.

First

and foremost, holding

sports

competitions most probably

cause

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causes

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serious injuries to players throughout their career ,for ,instance what happened to Mohammed Ali Clay and the severe brain damage he lived with the rest of his life after retirement.

In Addition

,

to

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brain concussions and disabilities like being in a wheelchair for your entire life ,or even

lead

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to death in other cases.

Besides

,it raises a generation full of violence and hatred between

the

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community and another.

For instance

, my nephew punched his sibling in the face after watching the final game of Mayweather

last

year.Plus,

such

games when played on the amateur level it lacks the minimum requirements of safety and caution, unlike professional championships.

On the contrary

, others find

this

kind of rough

sports

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a great amusement and entertainment to fulfil the need

of

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urgency and violence they miss in reality. Along with the high competition in

the

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American soccer

for

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instance , the audience finds

a

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great pleasure when their favourite team wins a match or the bowl at the end of the season to tease the fans of opponent teams.

However

,above all of

this

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it's a high-income sport for a lot of corporations and institutions that

gets

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a high revenue from selling tickets and buying players' kit to the sponsorship from international and even local brands. To sum up , everything with a limit is not only okay but

also

a marvellous thing

watch

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.We have to avoid injuries as much as possible , take all safety

measurements

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and prevent ourselves and the players from any harm. As well as protecting our community from violence , and

then

we can look at holding

sports

as entertainment

sportssports

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sports sports

sport sports

.