Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are a number of people who would argue that atomic
weapons
can offer a great number of advantages for all people worldwide. While I accept the benefits of nuclear Use synonyms
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, In my point of view the drawbacks overweight their benefits.
In today's modern era, atomic Use synonyms
weapons
can have multiple benefits. It can be considered as insurance for social members ,especially in developing countries from enemies' attacks or threats. Throughout history, the vast majority of social folks suffered due to other countries' attacks and it can impose huge distroyments on social members in different aspects like missing their wealth, deaths of dears and diseases as well. Use synonyms
Besides
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powerful energy can be used for important purposes to improve the country's income and its prestige internationally. These new sources of energy are so popular and capable to attract other's nations' attention in Linking Words
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way.
In spite of some advantages mentioned above, nuclear Linking Words
weapons
have some drawbacks too. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Its radioactive rays have a really negative impact on people's well-being ,especially those who live in areas near the main source of these products. In today's world, the number of children who are born with mental or physical problems increases considerably and nuclear energy and Linking Words
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have a key role. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the production and storage of these Linking Words
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hence
governments have to pay a great deal of money for them and ignore social members' main needs.
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it is so vital for each society to adopt modern Linking Words
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to save their residents' assurance and welfare, in my point of view its negative effects are irrecoverable.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite