We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. What are the reasons？How important are those museums to our society?

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are used as landmarks of the cities

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since these places attract many visitors or local

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who like to know the histories and cultures.

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phenomenon has reduced, these days, because of the high accessibility of the

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and lack of interest in those subjects. I personally believe that

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still have meaning in terms of having cultural identities and educational materials which can be seen in person. Fewer

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visit the

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by enjoying pieces online and they may focus less on historical and cultural aspects.

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can see displays through the

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, saving their money and time easily.

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of going to

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, some websites provide specific details of exhibits, connecting to various materials.

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can know

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information by using the

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, so they might feel no need to enjoy displays in person.

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, young generations would less feel the importance of

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. Nowadays, the world and countries became regarded as one world, mixing with other ethnical groups. Students may not care about

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character and some of them tend to ignore the importance of histories within the country.

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, they would be reluctant to go to

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which help

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know their identification and histories of ancestors. From my perspective,

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a great role in teaching

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to have cultural character and to know historical events directly. Watching the exhibition at the

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can be the only way to appreciate original exhibits face-to-face. Even though many

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regard

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as less useless places than in the past, those places can make

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examine every aspect of articles specifically. That process could help

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to remember pieces easily and to feel their cultural individuality directly. Not only that, galleries have benefits in teaching aspects. Teachers use displays as a supplemental role for schooling their students. Children might get a higher level of understanding by looking at themselves when teachers can give appropriate lessons with those. In

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context, I personally claim that

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should be concerned more carefully. In conclusion, the number of visitors has decreased recently, because the exhibitions can be replaced by

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materials and

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these days give less attention to their identities.

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, I personally believe that these situations should be discouraged in terms of high efficiency in education and building cultural identities.