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We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. What are the reasons？How important are those museums to our society?

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Museums
 are used as landmarks of the cities
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 since these places attract many visitors or local
people
 who like to know the histories and cultures.
However
,
this
 phenomenon has reduced, these days, because of the high accessibility of the
internet
 and lack of interest in those subjects. I personally believe that
museums
 still have meaning in terms of having cultural identities and educational materials which can be seen in person. Fewer
people
 visit the
museums
 by enjoying pieces online and they may focus less on historical and cultural aspects.
Firstly
,
people
 can see displays through the
internet
, saving their money and time easily.
Instead
 of going to
museums
, some websites provide specific details of exhibits, connecting to various materials.
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 can know
further
 information by using the
internet
, so they might feel no need to enjoy displays in person.
Secondly
, young generations would less feel the importance of
museums
. Nowadays, the world and countries became regarded as one world, mixing with other ethnical groups. Students may not care about
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 character and some of them tend to ignore the importance of histories within the country.
Hence
, they would be reluctant to go to
museums
 which help
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 know their identification and histories of ancestors. From my perspective,
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 always
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 a great role in teaching
people
 to have cultural character and to know historical events directly. Watching the exhibition at the
museums
 can be the only way to appreciate original exhibits face-to-face. Even though many
people
 regard
museums
 as less useless places than in the past, those places can make
people
 examine every aspect of articles specifically. That process could help
people
 to remember pieces easily and to feel their cultural individuality directly. Not only that, galleries have benefits in teaching aspects. Teachers use displays as a supplemental role for schooling their students. Children might get a higher level of understanding by looking at themselves when teachers can give appropriate lessons with those. In
this
 context, I personally claim that
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 should be concerned more carefully. In conclusion, the number of visitors has decreased recently, because the exhibitions can be replaced by
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internet
 materials and
people
 these days give less attention to their identities.
However
, I personally believe that these situations should be discouraged in terms of high efficiency in education and building cultural identities.
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