Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation
Dear Sir,
I am Fidan Durrani, a resident of Kohefiza, Bhopal. I like to bring to your notice that the historic
aquarium
, 'The Aquatic World' near our area has been in very poor condition. I am writing to you in order to spread awareness of the same among the neighbourhood.
This
aquarium
has been the most popular and beautiful building for ages. In addition
to that, it's quite famous and well-known among children. Furthermore
, it exhibits a large and varied collection of aquatic flora and fauna. Moreover
many school trips and college expeditions have been organised here for recreational and research works, respectively.
Since last
year the condition of the building has worsened in addition
to falling plaster and leaking pipelines. The aquarium
is also
not well maintained by the government. Cleaning of aquatic chambers and caretaking of fish are some of the most upsetting issues.
I request you to publish an article about this
historic site stating its glory in detail. I also
reckon to mention its value as a tourist attraction and how the irresponsible nature of the maintenance authorities led to devastating consequences. I'm sure that the article issued in your newspaper will spread awareness among people and they will help in the betterment of the aquarium
.
Yours Sincerely,
Fidan DurraniSubmitted by shozab.ansari on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite