Some employers are willing to give their workers a certain amount of unpaid sabbatical time, believing this benefits the individual and the organisation. Other employers see no merit in this arrangement and discourage it. Consider the possible arguments for and against unpaid sabbatical leave, and reach a viewpoint of your own.

It is a controversial topic if employees in any company decide to spend unpaid overtime thinking it could enhance their skills and push the organization forward. Or to leave
work
place on
time
and get paid for any overtime they do. I do support the point of view which is
this
matter should be up to
employee's
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situation and
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they should stay for
unpaid
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sabbatical
time
if they could. On one hand, those who argue that there is no advantage in working sabbatical
time
for free, say that workers have many other
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responsibilities
responsabilities
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responsibilities
in their life,
such
as taking care of their families or spending more
time
with friends.
Therefore
, they should not stay over their duties
time
.
For example
, in
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the vast majority of people prefer to visit their relatives
those
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who live in small villages out of the
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capital
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capital
after they are getting done with
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their
thier
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their
work
responsibilities.
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result
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they try as much as they can to get their job done even before the
time
.
On the other hand
, staying a certain amount of unpaid sabbatical
time
gives many benefits for
company
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and individual, when it comes to the
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employees
emlpoyees
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employees
, for sure they gain much more training and adaptation
with
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work
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environment.
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fresh graduates who need to learn more about their new
work
-life should take
this
suggestion into account. If they want to be qualified and get more experience in a short
time
, they would spend
the
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most of
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their
the
thier
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their
day
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time
at
work
.
In other words
the value
not
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only in money but
also
in learning. In conclusion,
this
topic has both sides negative and positive and
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count
this
by his point of view
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