Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?

It has been observed that getting
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for doing voluntary work should be very
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for any job seeker. There
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myriad of benefits as well
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doing voluntary work for
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. Both the pros and cons are
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paragraphs.
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, when you are engaged in some kind of voluntary or
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work, you create an impact or you are doing your part to create a change. I think it is a wonderful action. And for people in their old age who find it difficult to sit at home, I think volunteering is a great social activity. You are not only enjoying the benefits from the government but, you are
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giving back to the
community
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benefits without
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any guilt.
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men or women
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trees
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which is
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being at home and looking at the TV all day. In my opinion, I think it is always a good idea to be engaged in some kind of activity that helps an individual and in turn helps the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Long-term job seekers
  • Government benefits
  • Voluntary work
  • Community service
  • Employability
  • Sense of purpose
  • Mental health
  • Stigma
  • Unemployed
  • Public funds
  • Positively impact
  • Community
  • Exploit
  • Vulnerable individuals
  • Devalue
  • Volunteerism
  • Informal contributions
  • Skill-matching
  • Beneficial and fulfilling
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