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Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

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Technology over years has influenced various facets of life and learning for
children
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 is no exception. While some
children
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 have better learning by watching
TV
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 ,whether or not
children
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 should watch
TV
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 regularly
both
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 in school and at home is a contentious issue.The situation has
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 its merits and demerits.In the following paragraphs advantages and disadvantages will be discussed followed by my personal viewpoint It has been scientifically proven that audio-visual senses develop in
children
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 earlier than reading and comprehension skills.
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 when
children
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 are given an opportunity to utilize
television
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 for their learning which is a great source of audio-visual learning they tend to be more attentive and find the whole experience very intriguing .
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 it is no surprise that parents around the globe are subscribing to
television
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 channels for child learning . But in my ,opinion students should not be allowed to watch
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 regularly
both
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 in school and at home because the disadvantages that one has outweighed the advantages offered by the same.
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 with,
Children
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 tend to sit in front of the
television
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 like couch potatoes and don't indulge in physical activities. These lead to a long-term detrimental effect on their health and hinder the overall
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 of
children
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 . ,
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, long screen time affects the eyes of
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 adversely and results in poor eyesight and several eye issues in
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.
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 because of spending excessive time in front of the
television
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children
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 have slow
development
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 of essential skills
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 as reading and comprehension .They
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 become anti-social and
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 cannot develop their overall personality . To hammer the
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 nail I would like to say that a few hours of
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 time could benefit
children
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 but regular watching of
TV
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both
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 in school and at home should be avoided as it adversely affects a child's
development
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 .Other interesting methods of learning like enjoying nature, and having group studies should be encouraged for the overall
development
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 of the child.

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