Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether the government should make a

payment

for the

health

care

system

and schooling.

While

some claim that governors take liability for making a

payment

for healthcare and the educational

system

, the opposite makes a statement that neither

health

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care

nor education

are

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accountable to the authority. I would contend that it is integral for the

state

to shoulder responsibility for the

health

care

system

and the education but it is not full to some extent. Without a shadow of a doubt, It is vital that the

authority

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spend money

for

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the medical

system

and educational

system

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systems

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.

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explanation for

this

could be

that

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as

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for schooling and physical

health

which are indispensable elements to prosper an economy for a county.

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, Australia, Germany and China are the leading countries

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be cited as compelling instances, in those countries the

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not only

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free- college

policy

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but

also

they

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provide

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students with

scholarship

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and

supply

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citizens with medical insurance.

Thus

,

payment

for two integral systems is crucial that the

state

should implement.

While

the necessity of supporting finances for

educational

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system

and medical

care

of the governor

are

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widely acknowledged, its counterpart still

linger

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.

This

is

due to

the fact that the

state

’s budget is not formidable enough to utilize since they must pour money into a wide range of alternative facets and settlers had better make a

payment

for those aspects by the way they will enhance awareness in

health

’s protectiveness and guarantee the quality of study.

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,

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up infrastructure, thriving tourism

service

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and

extend

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leisure activities can be cited as

a compelling instances

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a compelling instance

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for other fields

which

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in which

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are

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the governor

have

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to invest

in

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. If the

authority

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pay in full, Some people who have unhealthy habits

such

as gambling,

smoking

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which have a direct impact on their physical

health

or a number of people who are slothful in study will benefit a bargain it’s unfair for alternative liable people. In short,

although

financing healthcare and education is indispensable for the development of a country, the

state

had not better pay these expenses entirely.