The company you work for has decided to close the cafeteria, as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director. Give reasons of low usage. How will it affect the staff? Suggest ways to improve it.

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Dear Mr Johnson I am writing to let you know that I feel disappointed because I found out that the cafeteria on the

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floor of our building is about to shut down in a month. As far as I ,know less variety of food provided on the menu is the reason for fewer customers. Prior to that, it leads to less income. I personally like the cuisine they sell, it is both delicious and time-saving since it is in the same building as our company. I reckon when the cafe is out of service some people , including ,

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since another cafe which is close to our company is 400 miles away, I feel that definitely affects most of the staff of several companies of our building. I strongly believe when the cafe adds some delicious meals, desserts, salads and some types of beverages to its menu, many people will get interested in trying out the food.

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, they will probably have a pretty great income. Yours faithfully, Nigorakhon

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The company you work for has decided to close the cafeteria, as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director. Give reasons of low usage. How will it affect the staff? Suggest ways to improve it.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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