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Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-Speaking countries to learn the “international language – English". It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English-speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

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recent world, the number of students who go abroad to study
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 is rapidly increasing.
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 is because they think that the best way to learn the
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 is to visit those places.
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, I strongly believe there are many other approaches that they can study
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 other than visiting the
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 I mean that they can use online studies or they can enrol
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schools
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 where British or American native teachers provide
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 account, I would like to give some examples and state my view. One of the best ways to learn
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 other than to study abroad is to use online
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 nowadays, there are many good programs offered by both public and private institutions. All you have to do is to search reputable
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schools
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 on the web and choose a course
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your level and enrol.
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, some famous British or American universities are offering internet open
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which
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 anybody can participate and people can extend their
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 knowledge by joining the sessions. The other effective way to learn the
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 is to join local
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 which offer native
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 speakers'
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 the tuition may be a little high, it is worthwhile to enrol them considering
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 and costs balance compared to other options.
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, some prominent universities provide local MBA programs, where professors travel to
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foreign countries for a semester to teach.
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, students who participate
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 these programs can learn both business and
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 without leaving their home countries. In conclusion, looking at the above examples, I strongly agree that physically visiting abroad is not the only way to learn
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 I do agree that to know and understand how
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 people live under what kind of culture, it might be best to visit them, I am convinced that online
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 and local school enrollments can give learners equally efficient measures to learn the
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 and obtain
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 international tool.
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