Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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are consuming sharply and it brings pollution
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citizens care about recycling but their numbers are lower than
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. A few humans do not believe in recycling, they say; ‘’
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our forests and
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reason is that, due to fewer recycling problems, there are so many trees cut down lately because so many individuals throw their
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books.
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several forests vanished recently and
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more trouble
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many experts say
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affecting humans. Especially rain forests consume hugely CO2 and produce O2 that’s why these woods are important for the global warming problem since these times CO2 levels are higher than ever The
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of source and
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of water, some of the African soils fight each
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trouble happened in northern lands and they deal with it on account of recycling they provide fresh water for their folks easily. All things considered, recycling is essential for either wood or our
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. It reduces CO2 level
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our atmosphere is getting clear and provide more
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for mankind. Governments ought to support recycling through advertisements and legal requirements. Humans should divide their trash into paper, glass and plastic because of recycling issues.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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