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he issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

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The given picture demonstrates the attendance of the number of males and
females
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 at an education centre in the year 2009.The circle chart illustrates the
age
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 of the members who are included in the course.
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, the bar graph shows the active participation of women over men.
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, they showed less attendance only in the sculpture of a 5% gap.
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, on considering the
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 skill which is drama
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 were 10% higher than males.Moving on, in painting
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 were just 5% higher than males.
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 in ,language there is a huge spike in the percentage shown that women showed 20% higher enrollment than men.
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, considering the pie chart folks under the
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 20 were of about 5%,
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 considering the
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group
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 between 40-49 it is about 26%.
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, persons in the
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group
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 50 or above 50 showed higher participation.
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, individuals in the
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 20-29 marked attendance as 16%. To summarise, elder folks showed more participation than the younger ones and most of the people in each
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 were
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