Some people argue that teaching chilren of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both view and give you opinion.

People have different opinions about the "seeded class" scheme which is separating
students
and giving varied
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education
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education
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their academic performance. Some believe
this
method would help
students
to reach their fullest potential while others support that it is more reasonable to teach all the levels of
students
together. On the one hand, the separate teaching scheme tends to have a positive influence on all kinds of
students
. The most obvious advantage lies in the fact that it allows
teachers
to employ different pedagogic strategies and tailor the class to suit different groups of
students
' needs.
For example
, for the more intelligent
students
who are more likely to have a quicker mind and stronger knowledge thirty intention,
teachers
could plan more difficult and complex
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in their syllabus. And for
students
who did not perform
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and may be slow at learning or acquiring new skills and knowledge,
thus
a step by step guidance and suitable teaching strategies are highly desirable. In
this
way, the learning efficiency for both of them could be promoted, which
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them to
further
their academic performance.
On the other hand
, those who are in support of
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integration
intergration
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integration
teaching may
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firstly
firmly
firtly
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argue that separating education is a kind of violation of individual rights and
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discrimination
for
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against
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academically disadvantaged
ones
. It is true that to some extent, a few
teachers
may hardly treat each group of learners without any prejudice.
However
, they are actually oversimplifying
this
problem and
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think the notion of equality is not
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he
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issue. The less intelligent
students
can be allowed to choose some advanced
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courses
crocuses
crouses
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courses
originally designed for those
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ones
, and vice versa. Meanwhile, if those left-behind
students
receive the lesson in the same class
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their outstanding peers, under
this
situation,
teachers
may prefer to help
diatinguished
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distinguish
distinguished
ones
and be reluctant to deal with the problems of academically poor
ones
more seriously. In conclusion, I believe separating classes are bring more benefits
toward
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students
and the authority should take
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personal
prefernce
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preference
preferences
into consideration so that the educational methods could help
students
to achieve
the
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greatest potential.
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