You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Writing a letter to this friend. In your letter . Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college . Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her . Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Sam, How are you? I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to you regarding my opinion of your choice. Let me discuss my view in the following paragraph.

To begin

with, I want to say as we are growing up together I think the best way for you is to find a physical effort because we are really trying to have big and strong muscles.

Moreover

, I know you do have not a wealthy family and college is completely expensive for you.

For example

, if you go to the university you need extra money for enrollment and transport

also

books or even food.

Furthermore

, I believe you can after find a good job with a nice salary if you enjoy it you will go to the college

to work.

For instance

, every morning go to the job and afternoon go to the university.

Although

, maybe it will be a little hard for you but is possible.

In addition

, I suggest you find physical work

Instead

of working in the office because the office after a time will bore you and have not a good salary so you cannot good earning money. Writing to your reply. Best wishes, Saeed Sam.

Submitted by saeedforoghi538 on Mon Nov 14 2022

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7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Financial independence
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