Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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believed

by

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some

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that global involvement could settle

problems

with the environment, while others think that it should be determined on a national

level

. In my opinion, the impact of global decisions on environmental

problems

could affect a successful result in some critical

problems

such

as

greenhouse

gasses

, while solutions on a national

level

could be more useful in questions of regional

level

. On the one hand, many think that the essential world environmental

problem

related to

greenhouse

gasses

can be solved

in

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co-operation

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cooperation

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on a global

level

.

In other words

,

this

problem

affects entire countries,

consequently

,

involvement

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the involvement

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of all parties in solving the

problem

could decrease the amount of

greenhouse

gasses

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gas

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emissions in the atmosphere.

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, at the Stocholm’s conference in

2019

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the leaders of more than 100 countries met for discussing the

problem

of

greenhouse

gasses

and agreed to apply a new approach to tracking the

amount

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number

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of

gasses

emitted into the atmosphere.

However

, there are many who believe that some environmental

problems

,

such

as emissions of harmful substances from

factories

, could be solved only on a national

level

. It is difficult to argue against

this

view as long as many

factories

are located near cities, and

this

problem

can be settled only on a regional

level

and

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it is

also

more efficient than

to discuss

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such

a

problem

on a global scale.

For instance

, the governments of particular regions know the features of a region and can impose some restrictions which can forbid the building of

factories

near settlements. To conclude,

although

it is still believed by many that environmental

problems

can be solved only

in

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with

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the co-operation

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co-operation

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cooperation

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of entire parties, others advocate the national

level

could better settle

this

problem

. In my opinion, global environmental

problems

which affect

all

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apply

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the world could be solved only with

involvement

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the involvement

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of all countries, while some particular environmental

problems

,

such

as emissions from

factories

, are more efficiently

determine

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on a regional

level

.