Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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believed
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some
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that global involvement could settle
problems
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with the environment, while others think that it should be determined on a national
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. In my opinion, the impact of global decisions on environmental
problems
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could affect a successful result in some critical
problems
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such
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as
greenhouse
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gasses
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, while solutions on a national
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could be more useful in questions of regional
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. On the one hand, many think that the essential world environmental
problem
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related to
greenhouse
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gasses
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can be solved
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co-operation
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cooperation
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on a global
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.
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,
this
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problem
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affects entire countries,
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,
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the involvement
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of all parties in solving the
problem
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could decrease the amount of
greenhouse
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gasses
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emissions in the atmosphere.
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, at the Stocholm’s conference in
2019
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the leaders of more than 100 countries met for discussing the
problem
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of
greenhouse
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gasses
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and agreed to apply a new approach to tracking the
amount
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of
gasses
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emitted into the atmosphere.
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, there are many who believe that some environmental
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,
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as emissions of harmful substances from
factories
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, could be solved only on a national
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. It is difficult to argue against
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view as long as many
factories
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are located near cities, and
this
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problem
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can be settled only on a regional
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and
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it is
also
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more efficient than
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such
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a
problem
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on a global scale.
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, the governments of particular regions know the features of a region and can impose some restrictions which can forbid the building of
factories
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near settlements. To conclude,
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it is still believed by many that environmental
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can be solved only
in
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with
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the co-operation
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co-operation
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cooperation
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of entire parties, others advocate the national
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could better settle
this
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problem
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. In my opinion, global environmental
problems
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which affect
all
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the world could be solved only with
involvement
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the involvement
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of all countries, while some particular environmental
problems
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,
such
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as emissions from
factories
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, are more efficiently
determine
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determined
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on a regional
level
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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