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In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a pasittive or a negative development?

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The
freedom
 given to
children
 these days is increasing in many places. I believe because humans natural inclination is to experience liberty from
early
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 stages of life, giving more
freedom
 to
children
 with
careful
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a careful
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 observation from
parents
 can mitigate effects like the yearning, longing
passions
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 and harmful
behavior
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 in their adulthood. One of the main causes of negative effects concerning giving
freedom
 to
children
 is oblivious
parents
. To commence, we can mention
behaviors
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 like Having drastic measures or being ignorant
on
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children
’s actions. Sure thing
parents
 are under a strict obligation to check on their
child
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child's
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 life and
behavior
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 but being too strict on them can cause so many catastrophes in their future namely, having problems
contact
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 people, being too timid or having Harmful
behaviors
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.
On the contrary
, being loose about
children
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children's
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freedom
 and their daily basis actions
duo
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due
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 to
parent`s
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their parent`s
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 hectic lifestyle can lead to terrible experiences at
the
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 very young age and
also
 psychological issues. Overall, I still firmly believe that giving
freedom
 to
children
 is crucial to help them build their
personality
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personalities
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.
Freedom
 development is essential to so many young people for the reason that it contains notable instances
such
 as choosing their study major, personal relationships, practical knowledge and so many more that only can be achieved with the adventure coming from
the
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freedom
. To draw a conclusion, the most formative period of life is childhood and there are a good deal of constructive outcomes and
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destructive
destructives
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destructive
 consequences
on
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 giving
freedom
 to
children
.
Thus
, It is a concerted effort from both
parents
 and
children
 to develop a beneficial and practical childhood where the
children
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 liberty is not taken from them.
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