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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?

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Thanks to developed medical areas, the number of senior
citizens
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 has become bigger with
increasing
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 the portion of the population.
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 phenomenon could have bad impacts on
society
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, in my opinion, in terms of delaying the development of the country and giving
pressure
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 on younger generations. When senior
citizens
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 account for a huge portion of
society
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, the speed of advancing the country would be slower than in the past. In
society
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, human resources might be essential to be developed, especially those who have more creative thoughts and can do labour.
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, people might think that seniors are less creative than the younger generation and
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 would stick with their thoughts even though they have more experience. The companies,
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, would struggle with recruiting workers and raising potential employees.
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 trend can link to a fixed
society
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 without development in the long term.
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 phenomenon
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 has an effect on the younger generation because they feel
pressure
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 to support old
citizens
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. Most countries spend the budget for seniors
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 as free medical checks or lower transmission fees. Those budgets may come from the taxes of social members who do work.
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,
society
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 would raise the tax on workers, as the number of the old population increases.
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, young people might pay the increased taxes which account for the vast majority of income. They could feel more
pressure
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 to support the old. In conclusion,
society
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 tends to have an increasing number of senior
citizens
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, which can cause negative effects on
society
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.
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 is because
society
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 finds it hard to have human resources to be advanced and
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 trend would put
pressure
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 on the younger generation in terms of increasing taxes.
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