Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

There are

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controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the fact that whether the

authority

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should make an investment in medical care and the

education

system

.

While

some hold a strong view that the state ought to bear the financial burden of the

healthcare

system

and schooling, the opposite makes a statement that allocating money to

healthcare

and

education

is not the accountability of the government. In my opinion, I would contend that the governors had better cover the cost of the medical

system

and

people

’s learning journey but they shouldn’t fully pour money into both mentioned factors. Without a shadow of a doubt, providing financial support for

healthcare

and

education

is necessary for the authority. The explanation for

this

is

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could be that it improves the quality of professional

labor

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and

physical

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the physical

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health of the

people

to prosper the country’s economy.

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, developed countries

such

as Germany and the

Netherland

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waive tuition fees or

provided

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scholarships and

supplied

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health insurance to their

people

,

making

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leading countries

have

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economic strength.

Thus

, cashing in the above two important

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is taken into consideration which the government ought to do.

While

the importance of

financially

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support for schooling and

healthcare

of the governor is widely acknowledged, they shouldn’t thoroughly make a payment for two facets. Given the fact that the national coffer does not allow it

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there are many alternative aspects to invest in.And

people

had better pay because by doing

this

, they will have more responsibility and raise awareness about protecting

health

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and ensuring

quality

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of learning.

Therefore

, if the government pays all but

people

involved in social evils or those who drop out of school

also

benefit from it, causing inequality for responsible citizens.

Hence

, the authority ought not to fund In conclusion,

although

financial

supports

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for the

education

system

and the

healthcare

system

is

of

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the

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necessity

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for the country’s economic development,

this

cost shouldn’t

be suffer

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from

government’s

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the government’s

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budget.