Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Since we live in a century of rapid technological development, which
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to drastic changes in our society and
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human lives
as a result
. It is a product of the modern world and we should be thankful and grateful
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its opportunities. Some people claim that we live in the best time ever. I absolutely agree with
this
statement and believe that
this
era is the best time to live, because of modern medical technology and equipment, so
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essay will extensively explain the reasons to support my opinion based on real-life examples.
To begin
with, the medical field has been transformed greatly, which
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able to transplant organs from one human to another one, which in my opinion is one of the most significant achievements of the field.
Moreover
, other inventions allow treating various life-threatening diseases along with some disorders
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be prevented as well.
For instance
, early diagnosis and treatment are possible in the preventive aspect of medicine, for which they invented
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devises
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as MRI
scanner
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scanners
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, X-ray
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and so on. Analyzing the above it can be concluded that there are many possibilities to delay our death as well.
On the other hand
, there is plenty of equipment that
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people
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under dangerous conditions without worrying too much. All
this
is possible, because of
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of many safety devices, which are available. To illustrate with an example, humanoid computers and robots are common and they are used in risky working fields since they perform with much
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and tirelessly than any human.
Consequently
, we can protect ourselves from getting injured or
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accident
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. In conclusion, a vast majority of people believe that
this
is the most precious era of the entire world history as modern technological advancement and it possible to live longer than usual. I absolutely agree with it, as I strongly believe that we will see much more changes in the coming years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life expectancy
  • Medical advancements
  • Innovations
  • Quality of life
  • Transportation
  • Agricultural developments
  • Food security
  • Educational reforms
  • Cybersecurity
  • Privacy concerns
  • Automation
  • Environmental concerns
  • Climate change
  • International cooperation
  • Developed and developing countries
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