Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Since we live in a century of rapid technological development, which

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to drastic changes in our society and

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human lives

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. It is a product of the modern world and we should be thankful and grateful

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its opportunities. Some people claim that we live in the best time ever. I absolutely agree with

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statement and believe that

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era is the best time to live, because of modern medical technology and equipment, so

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essay will extensively explain the reasons to support my opinion based on real-life examples.

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with, the medical field has been transformed greatly, which

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able to transplant organs from one human to another one, which in my opinion is one of the most significant achievements of the field.

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, other inventions allow treating various life-threatening diseases along with some disorders

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be prevented as well.

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, early diagnosis and treatment are possible in the preventive aspect of medicine, for which they invented

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as MRI

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, X-ray

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and so on. Analyzing the above it can be concluded that there are many possibilities to delay our death as well.

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, there is plenty of equipment that

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people

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under dangerous conditions without worrying too much. All

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is possible, because of

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of many safety devices, which are available. To illustrate with an example, humanoid computers and robots are common and they are used in risky working fields since they perform with much

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and tirelessly than any human.

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, we can protect ourselves from getting injured or

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. In conclusion, a vast majority of people believe that

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is the most precious era of the entire world history as modern technological advancement and it possible to live longer than usual. I absolutely agree with it, as I strongly believe that we will see much more changes in the coming years.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Life expectancy
Medical advancements
Innovations
Quality of life
Transportation
Agricultural developments
Food security
Educational reforms
Cybersecurity
Privacy concerns
Automation
Environmental concerns
Climate change
International cooperation
Developed and developing countries

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Are you for or against international trade?

Some feel that individuals today spend too much time following political news while others feel politics deserves greater attention. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own answers.

In the future, fewer people will start bands or produce music because they will worry about their music being downloaded from the internet for free. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?