Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Since we live in a century of rapid technological development, which
lead
to drastic changes in our society and Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
prolonging
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prolongs
the
human lives Correct article usage
apply
as a result
. It is a product of the modern world and we should be thankful and grateful to
its opportunities. Some people claim that we live in the best time ever. I absolutely agree with Change preposition
for
this
statement and believe that this
era is the best time to live, because of modern medical technology and equipment, so this
essay will extensively explain the reasons to support my opinion based on real-life examples.
To begin
with, the medical field has been transformed greatly, which now
able to transplant organs from one human to another one, which in my opinion is one of the most significant achievements of the field. Add a missing verb
is now
Moreover
, other inventions allow treating various life-threatening diseases along with some disorders can
be prevented as well. Correct pronoun usage
that can
For instance
, early diagnosis and treatment are possible in the preventive aspect of medicine, for which they invented such
devises
as MRI Replace the word
devices
scanner
, X-ray Fix the agreement mistake
scanners
machine
and so on. Analyzing the above it can be concluded that there are many possibilities to delay our death as well.
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machines
On the other hand
, there is plenty of equipment that enable
people Correct subject-verb agreement
enables
work
under dangerous conditions without worrying too much. All Add the particle
to work
this
is possible, because of invention
of many safety devices, which are available. To illustrate with an example, humanoid computers and robots are common and they are used in risky working fields since they perform with much Add an article
the invention
precision
and tirelessly than any human. Correct quantifier usage
more precision
Consequently
, we can protect ourselves from getting injured or Add a missing verb
having accident
accident
.
In conclusion, a vast majority of people believe that Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
this
is the most precious era of the entire world history as modern technological advancement and it possible to live longer than usual. I absolutely agree with it, as I strongly believe that we will see much more changes in the coming years.Submitted by riveraeka55 on
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