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Large public places such as parks and squares are essential in both citites and towns Do you agree or disagree?

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The tax system in some countries varies a lot, but
this
 has a lot of benefits for
education
 and
healthcare
. In my opinion
healthcare
 and
education
 should be the responsibility of the
government
. On the one hand, many
people
 believe that the
government
 is responsible for providing
healthcare
,
for example
, the
government
 is able to provide
support
 to all
people
 when they have an unfortunate accident or suffer a disease
that is
 easily treatable.
Additionally
, they can
support
education
 for all ages because some families can
support
 a child to study,
for example
 in lower class areas where a person can pay for a child to study, and the
government
 should assist these
people
.
In contrast
, some
people
 believe that
healthcare
 and
education
 should not be funded by taxes because they believe it is unfair for
education
 and
healthcare
 to be funded by taxes.
For example
, some
people
 work hard and should pay more taxes than others, and these
people
 think they cannot afford
healthcare
 and
education
.
Therefore
,
although
 the tax has some pros and cons, I believe that as long as countries have a fair tax, everyone will
support
 it.
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