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Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #benefit #cooperation #protection #environment #interest #world #business
This
 diagram illustrates one company's simplified ordering process. Overall, there are two ways to get to the end. After the procedure is received, you will go to the line from current and work your way one way when you say yes and the other when you say no until you reach the final part (shipped and charged) of
this
 process.
First
 of all, when you start with yes, it asks if you qualify for a discount,
then
, after saying yes, another question appears, they say discount applied but if you say no, the form is entered into the system and shipped. Scantly, when you start with no, it goes to the current client,
then
 the new client is added to the customer database, and after that, it goes to plan entered and shipping.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • environmental protection
  • Paris Agreement
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • biodiversity
  • shared responsibility
  • economic growth
  • free trade deals
  • economic partnerships
  • investment
  • innovation
  • technological advancement
  • sustainable practices
  • prosperity
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