Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your own opinion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • integrate
  • social harmony
  • cultural conflicts
  • economic opportunities
  • local market needs
  • cultural identity
  • emotional support
  • preserve traditions
  • social cohesion
  • unity
  • stable and harmonious society
  • economic impact
  • participate
  • multiculturalism
  • cultural landscape
  • diverse perspectives
  • innovation
  • global connections
  • sense of identity
  • mental health
  • well-being
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