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University students should pay the full cost of their studies because university education benefits individuals rather than the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #students #cost #studies #education #individuals #society
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No doubt society can teach many things to individuals,
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, tertiary
education
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 is of utmost importance for graduates as it has countless advantages
such
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 as master in specific
skills
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 and they can get more opportunities for their success in careers. So,
students
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 should pay full fees for university
education
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. I firmly agree with the given notion.
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 with, the
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 and foremost is, it helps in training in specific
skills
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. After graduation,
students
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 have to choose a specific area in which they are interested in university. They got trained and mastered in a specific field
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that
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society can't teach them.
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, after bachelors in any field
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 as medical, non-medical or arts,
students
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 have to choose a particular subject they want to enhance their knowledge and
skills
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. University teachers will only be paid if
students
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 paid
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 full cost of their studies as they use many resources in universities. The
students
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 who completed tertiary
education
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 have more career opportunities than the graduates. In spite of
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, they learn to be professional and mature behaviour.
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, an individual who did a Master's in Surgery will get a well-paid job than a graduate doctor. They can
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 learn cooperation, time management, competition, and so many other
skills
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 including their
education
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.For practice ,knowledge. Universities need labs and other resources which can only be paid for if there is reinforcement.
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, without useful resources,
students
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 can't learn
skills
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. To conclude, owing to the many merits of tertiary
education
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, the cost of
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education
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 should be paid in full as graduates can learn professional and social
skills
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 from universities as it helps not only their career but as well in personal growth.
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