It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, the negative impact of tourism on
tourist
spots
has increased. Some believe that it is because of the behaviour of some
visitors
. In
this
essay, I will present my views on why these
visitors
behave badly at
tourist
places and what measures can be taken to resolve
this
issue.
To begin
with, a huge number of incidents have taken place in the
last
few years where the local
visitors
behave extremely
bad
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badly
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with the other foreigners. They tease and make fun of their English. The tour guide is rude and in a hurry to finish his job. The stall keepers just outside the
tourist
spots
charge a hefty price for things.
Additionally
, the locals create
nuisance
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a nuisance
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when they visit some places.
For instance
, they scribe the walls with the names of their partners. They try to touch the expensive art to take selfies. They spit pan and gutka on walls and make
it
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them
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dirty. The pickpocketers keep an eye on foreigners at
tourist
spots
and losing mobiles and wallets has become a regular incident nowadays.
On the other hand
, the government should take necessary actions
such
as imposing strict
rules
and
regulation
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regulations
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at
tourist
spots
. They should penalize the defaulters and make them pay a heavy price.
For instance
, the guards should be monitored to ensure they work sincerely. CCTV cameras can be set up to monitor the
visitors
’ activities. The rule boards should clearly mention the
rules
and fines so that it is easily visible to
visitors
, and they may read them before they try to break the
rules
. To conclude, the government should impose strict
rules
and regulations to create a positive impact on tourism. The guards working in the
tourist
spots
should be sincere in their work and the defaulters should be penalized.
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