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Write about the following topic. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#topic #function #music #people #stress
The table given below demonstrates the number of
people
 residing in New Zealand between the
years
 2011 and 2012.
Firstly
, all the
people
 belonging to different
age
 groups scenarios are mentioned.Considering the maximum, the number rose to 60% from 2011 to 2011. Moving on, the change in the population of
people
 below 15
years
 decreased in 2012 by about 750.Turning to, folks between the
age
 group 15 to 39
years
, it can be seen that there is a slight decrease in the ratio of -0,2.Moving forward, for the
next
 group of individuals ranging between the
age
 groups 40 to 64
years
 there is a slight increase in the proportion and the percentage change is +0,6.
Last
 but not least folks belonging who are 65 and above, it is clearly evident that there huge spike in the number ratio is 500.000 in 2011 to 900.000 in 2022 and the percentage change is +4,0 which is higher than the
people
 belonging to other
age
 groups. To conclude, the total chart provides us with the information that most of the older
people
 prefer staying in New Zealand over the rest of the individuals.
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