Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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meet online with others rather than face-to-face
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and in my opinion it is a problem caused by
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from average.
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feel safe with their
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which are famous in recent youths.But the primary issue is, they don't create
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them to how to be humble in front of differences before they become a mentor as a parent or
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generation. As the
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more and more. So in my opinion, the upward trend of spending time with being online cause
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teenagers and they prefer to stay online even when they
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the old days. To summarize
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, the high level of self-unconfident of the younger population in today's society and
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them to choose online socialising. To solve
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the importance of face-to-face communication given by parent and
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