Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. Agree or disagree.
Luck
is the probable kind of success which is not always working as if the person
wants to fulfil targets, it is not dependent upon luck
. Similarly
, I disaccord with the fact that hard work
and good deeds of a person
are key to achieving success in life.
The first
point of my disagreement is that if an individual does a hard endeavour only then
he can fulfil his aims. To elaborate, hardworking plays an integral role in every important work
that gives the surety to reach higher levels and with the help of it people gain knowledge regarding work
without actually depending on luck
. As per the reports by Oxford University, it evident that the adults who wanted to become doctors were succeeded in their passion by doing a hard performance in their studies in 2008 Which proves that everything is possible with strong determination and willpower as luck
is also
given in, in front of an uphill battle.
Another point of my disagreement is that the person
achieves the aims with good deeds ,not with karma. To intricate, if a mortal does good work
and everybody gets impressed by the work
of that particular person
, it gives initiative to the man in achieving success. For example
, if businessmen work
for the prosperity of customers and provide them with better quality goods at a reasonable price, they will definitely earn a hefty amount. Hence
, good practices help people to satisfy desires and entire dreams.
To conclude, although
a Goodluck person
works like magic sometimes, it does not show appropriate results as always that can show through hard work
and good deeds.Submitted by amit7613 on
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