It has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public place except in certain area. All countries should make these rules. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In
this
modern era, many people
are believing that smoking injuries to health and it died people
. Many countries publicly smoking is ben except few locations. I strongly agreed on
with Change preposition
apply
this
notion will
discuss Correct word choice
and will
in
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it in
further
paragraph with suitable reasons.
Supporting my agreement Add an article
a further
the further
to
the given statement, I firmly believe that smoking is the major cause of death and Change preposition
with
unrecoverable
disease. Correct article usage
an unrecoverable
For example
, cancer around the world. Cigarettes contain the
nicotine and tobacco which is mainly drawn to the disease. In fact, smoking cause several other problems related to health like hypertension, heart attack and many more. As per the recent survey conducted by India’s largest NGOs on World Health Day, the report says that 40 Correct article usage
apply
percentage
of Replace the word
percent
people
died due to smoking every year as they are used to smoke
daily more than 3 Wrong verb form
smoking
time
in Fix the agreement mistake
times
day
. Add an article
the day
a day
Furthermore
, old age people
are habited to smoke local
made bidi which Change the adjective
locally
specially
made from Add a missing verb
is specially
tree’s
leaves and tobacco. These are the habits direct impact Change noun form
tree
to
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on
lungs
which increase the chances Correct article usage
the lungs
developing
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of developing
the
cancer.
Change the article
apply
In addition
to another supporting points
against Replace the adjective
another supporting point
other supporting points
this
statement, there are several benefits to ban
smoking publicly. Prohibiting smoking will improve the quality of the air and oxygen. Wrong verb form
banning
As a result
, the pollution is decreased, and people
can breathe in and out the clean air and it is preventing the risk of the
heart attack in nonsmoker Correct article usage
apply
people
. However
, there are some of
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the
negatives as well Correct article usage
apply
for
example, If the smoking ban Add the comma(s)
,for
at
public places, Change preposition
in
manufacturing
company sales count will be reduced drasticallyCorrect article usage
the manufacturing
Add the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
it would be impacted direct
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directly
to
the company revenues and government Change preposition
by
earning
as taxes.
In conclusion, I personally believe that smoking must be prohibited in to publicly Correct your spelling
earnings
it
would be beneficial for individuals, and it will reduce the disease globally.Correct word choice
because it
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