It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages
Nowadays it is true that the community tend to be in familiar conditions without taking any
risks
. Although
some think that the advantages of risks
are higher than the drawbacks, others
could think in reverse.
I think it is better to get risks
and win rather than never try. This
essay will explore reasons and examples for that.
Firstly
, if a person doesn't take risks
, he could regret it his whole life. It is better to be risky and try something than never knowing about it and being resentful about it. For instance
,nobody knows what kind of marriage to expect from the upcoming marriage,,
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however
if an individual because of afraidness won't try to build a family, he or she has the possibility to be lonely for the rest of his or her life.So, the negative consequence of not taking Add the comma(s)
,however
risks
is more dangerous than never trying.
Secondly
, putting yourself into risky situations makes people stronger and more confidentfident. While some folks are in their comfort zone whereas others
are trying their best by continuously taking risks
chances of being successful are extremely higher.For example
, while some folks are laying on sofas relaxing and enjoying their TV shows, ,,
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however
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,however
others
are permanently putting themselves in dangerous conditions by taking ambitious goals or commencing their own business despite uncertainty and no guarantee of success.Thus
,exiting from cosy conditions is much better rather than sitting at home without any trial.
Finally
, being in a safe zone is always easier than being at risk. While the benefits of taking risks
are considered by society as drawbacks, others
state that it is advantageous. I believe, that advantages of taking risks
outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by zhadym on
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