Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Actually, around the world people grow their conscience about the experimentation of animals because they discover the suffering that makes for them.
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exists groups of people, normally business owners in the cosmetics sector, still think and approve animal
tests
because they only reason improve their companies and investor's profit.
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from my point of, view animal investigation should be prohibited in all the world, can not be justified never, for many reasons: 1. They are living beings. 2. They suffer in the
tests
. 3. They have a conscience. 4. The companies have new ways and options for practising the
tests
. Among those alternatives are chemical experimentations and no animal
tests
,
for example
in some kinds of plants, nowadays exist chemical
tests
that replace all the other ways to get results in the cosmetics industry. I consider that people need to visit the different test
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around the world and get an opinion about that,
for example
in the united states actually exist many test
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with rabbits, monkeys and many other animals under catch and in extremal suffer conditions, behind
this
are the biggest cosmetics companies like Ebel, Ponds and many more. To conclude the animal was not created for chemical
tests
, viral
tests
, hunting, massive shows and any other non-natural scenarios, the animals should grow up in nature free of any kind of suffering, as in the nature sanctuaries in South America and Africa when they will have protection by the humans and not suffer.
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  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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