Do you think it is good to push students to study hard in their youth?

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, people are forceful toward their children about

study

and career from the very early stage of their childhood with the view that

,

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studying

studing

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studying

hard may make

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youngsters successful.

However

,

this

essay will show the disadvantage of pushing hard

for

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study

at

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youth. In my opinion, learning should be with pleasure

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pressure. If parents focus only

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education and keep the learner busy with

study

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, it will become a

disastar

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disaster

for the

further

ahead.

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, there are lots

things

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to do

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a

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youth,

such

as

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sports, hobbies etc. These activities will help learners to

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more

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and will keep them energetic and lively.

For instance

, our school keep an extra curriculum active class so trainees remain interested in their learning.

On the other hand

, if adolescents only stay busy with

study

, they may

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their interest in class and

study

also

. Without co-

curriculam

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curriculum

curricular

activities

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study

become boring and fail to keep novices active in class.

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study

will make a selfish and

self-centered

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generation who may not know how to help people, as well as, they lack the interest in contributing

toward

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society. To conclude, in my view, with the discussion above, it will be harmful if we make our youth engaged with education without social works or other activities where they may feel

interest

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in, as people need to

develope

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develop

their other skills with educating themselves.