The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

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illustration
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depicts
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depicts
the
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designs
of different
kind
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kinds
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of
studentsuites
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student suites
at Australian
university
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.It is clear from the
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drawing
drwaing
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drawing
that
two
people
room
is bigger than one person space.
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According
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whats
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what
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is shown, the couple people
room
has one bathroom ,
two
beds
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separated
supported
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separated
by
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cupboard
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,
two
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and two
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offices. In both spaces, there is
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relatively
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relativly
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relatively
small kitchen area
includs
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includes
esstinal
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essential
instrument
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such
as
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a stove
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, microwave, and sink. The noticed difference is that the biggest apartment has
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a dinning
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dinning
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table with
two
chairs. The single
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bedroom
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bed
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bedroom
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room
measers
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measures
about 15
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meter
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while the
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double
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double
bed
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bedroom
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room
measurs
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measures
about 24
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meters. In
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addition
addation
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addition
, the larger
room
cost
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350$ per week while the smaller
room
expenses will be 200$ weekly. To sum up we can say that, the couple
bed
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room
is
sutiable
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suitable
for those who want to save some money and enjoy living with a
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roommate
roomate
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roommate
while the single
bed
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room
is good for
those
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who
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who
like more
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privacy
pricey
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afford
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afford
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