There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays youth people feel more pressure related to their future academic success.
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led to a widespread opinion that non-academic Linking Words
subjects
should be taken away from the Use synonyms
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curriculum so Use synonyms
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to focus on their main lessons. From my point of view, I fully disagree with deleting these Use synonyms
subjects
as they are essential for the general fitness of Use synonyms
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and getting everyday Use synonyms
skills
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One evident drawback of stopping teaching PE is that Use synonyms
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would be less fit. Use synonyms
Although
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this
measure saves time for Linking Words
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and makes it possible to focus more on the main lessons, physical exercises are necessary for Use synonyms
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to grow healthy. Use synonyms
For instance
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who have regularly missed PE classes tend to come across problems related to backbone and heart more than those who have always taken part in those classes. Being physically active Use synonyms
also
increases the productivity of a person, Linking Words
in other words
doing more exercises allows pupils to study more effectively than avoiding them. Linking Words
As a result
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at the moment pupils would have Linking Words
development
in their education level, in the long term Replace the word
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this
measure would cause a lot of damage to Linking Words
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health and productivity.
Another point for the secondary Change the word
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subjects
remaining in the curriculum is that they give Use synonyms
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skills
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should have in the arsenal before graduation from Use synonyms
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. Running fast or being able to prepare food when the parents are absent, Use synonyms
for instance
, are important for becoming an autonomic person and being able to deal with everyday difficulties. Evidently, having a Linking Words
school
consisting of only academic Use synonyms
subjects
would lead to the adults having a lack of essential surviving Use synonyms
skills
, which is disastrous for every society.
In conclusion, I do not consider cutting out all secondary Use synonyms
subjects
from the Use synonyms
school
syllabus as the right measure, as it has a lot of drawbacks related to the health and autonomy of future adults.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite