Do you help other
people
? .Change the punctuation
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it is necessary?
First
I think that in general is not
necessaryReplace the word
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help to other
people
but it’s a good
definitely
for instance
in
one
case
one
family don’t have money because they were different problems but the father
needCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to
operationReplace the word
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forChange preposition
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heCorrect pronoun usage
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health
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therefore
the family need help! , and the
people
that id “solidary” helping
this
family and
this
good for the humanity in
this
world,
however
not all
people
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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solidary and
this
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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not
the Change the article
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ugly but yes the bad. Similar to
this
example I
about my experiences
inAdd the comma(s)
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this
case,
first
one
day I saw the child in the square and he worked
withChange preposition
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only three years!, in my
this
aren’tChange the verb form
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just because he only learned to speak very well, in
this
my mother and I gave he differents candys and to or three t-shirts
consequently
his happier was the best moment for my mother and I, in
additionally
otherChange the wording
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example is with my school because I’m in Don Bosco school and I am in the prom,
this
year we travelled to two communities the
first
CHAMINA
, and the
second
one
was MISKA. In
this
I was going to
CHAMINA
obviously
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with my prom was
one
of the best
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in my life because I know other
placeFix the agreement mistake
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but
this
place is very different that
liveReplace the word
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in the city
such
as in
the children are walking to their school but kilometres!
However
the best part was the
helped
one
with Change preposition
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otherCorrect pronoun usage
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,
this
is very small
however
my prom helps to
with different objects, shoes, snacks and more but
speciallyReplace the word
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for the children.
Finally
, in my
the
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differentsCorrect your spelling
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moods for helping
to Change preposition
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other
people
are good and
this
is a good cause, is the “solidary” the best
in your life but not the obligation
however
the small communities have the beautiful moments with helping
one
with other in their community.