COMMUNITIES AND HELPING EACH OTHER We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Do you help other
people
? .
it is necessary?
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?
.
First
I think that in general is not necessary
help to other Replace the word
necessarily
people
but it’s a good Correct your spelling
option
opcion
definitely Correct your spelling
option
for instance
in one
case one
family don’t have money because they were different problems but the father need
to Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
operation
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operate
for
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on
he
healthCorrect pronoun usage
his
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, therefore,
therefore
the family need help! , and the people
that id “solidary” helping this
family and this
good for the humanity in this
world, however
not all people
is
solidary and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
this
are
not Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
ugly but yes the bad. Similar to Change the article
apply
this
example I Correct your spelling
mentioned
mencioned
about my experiences Correct your spelling
mentioned
in
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,in
this
case, first
one
day I saw the child in the square and he worked with
only three years!, in my Change preposition
for
opinion
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,opinion
this
aren’t
just because he only learned to speak very well, in Change the verb form
isn’t
this
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situation
situacion
my mother and I gave he differents candys and to or three t-shirts Correct your spelling
situation
consequently
his happier was the best moment for my mother and I, in additionally
other
example is with my school because I’m in Don Bosco school and I am in the prom, Change the wording
another
this
year we travelled to two communities the first
CHAMINA
, and the second
one
was MISKA. In this
case
I was going to Add a comma
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CHAMINA
obviously traveled
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travelling
one
of the best experience
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experiences
place
but Fix the agreement mistake
places
this
place is very different that live
in the city Replace the word
living
such
as in Chamina
the children are walking to their school but kilometres! Correct your spelling
China
However
the best part was the communite
helped Correct your spelling
community
one
with
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apply
other
, Correct pronoun usage
another
this
communite
is very small Correct your spelling
community
however
my prom helps to Chamina
with different objects, shoes, snacks and more but Correct your spelling
China
specially
for the children.
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especially
Finally
, in my opinion
the Add a comma
,opinion
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different
differents
moods for helping Correct your spelling
different
to
other Change preposition
apply
people
are good and this
is a good cause, is the “solidary” the best Correct your spelling
option
opcion
in your life but not the obligation Correct your spelling
option
however
the small communities have the beautiful moments with helping one
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