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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Using solar systems in our homes is more and more popular as an alternative source of electricity in many countries around the world. But we should take into consideration any new technology has pros and cons. The idea of converting solar power into electricity is not new, but it is in recent years that technological advances have made it financially viable. On the one hand,
people
 got benefits from solar panels in their homes.
First
, it is a clear system for the air, being sustainable encouraged in the beginning
people
 who are in the environmental field that concerned in
this
 detail criteria. The market advertisement has a big role in producing it as a cheaper technology, so
this
 increase the attention of
people
 to have it to save more money and get use freely all electronic devices and get a hot shower with less money paid and less worry
this
 is a golden buzz for big families with the low outcome.
Moreover
, it is easy to be installed either in remote regions or top floor, as well we can control it from afar.
For example
, we have a friend whose parents live apart from his parent home and they are aged, so he decided to convince them to have solar panels he is handling it and all is good.
Furthermore
,
this
 useful easy invention cannot be without any faults.
First
 of all, the solar panels they replaced in a horizon way to absorb the Sun heat and the peak point is during the day and as the sunset begins you cannot use it anymore. As well not all countries have sunny climates all over the year.
For example
, the Mediterranean countries
such
 as Lebanon, Syria and Jordan the summer is only 3 to 4 or 5 months approximately and the fall and winter are the rest 7 months.
Finally
,
that is
 why some
people
 are still confused about having it or not. To conclude,
although
 recent technological advances have enabled
people
 to tap into
this
 endless source of cheap and sustainable solar energy, they have not yet resolved the drawbacks that come from its very nature.
People
 cannot command when and where they will produce
such
 energy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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