Write a letter to a community college in America which invited you to talk about your country. In your letter Accept invitation and suggest preferable dates Tell them what your talks will be about And what equipment you require them to arrange

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Dear Mr Yang, I am writing to inform you that I would like to accept your invitation. Thank you for your invitation and I would like to recommend three available days that I enable to present my ideas to you, respectively

this

Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday. I hope these three days can match your schedule as well. The diverse food in our country would be the topic that I am likely to introduce to you and the public since our nation is an island which has abundant natural resources.

Furthermore

, the various landscape is another hot topic that I would like to depict in my statements. I would like to require a projector in a conference room as well as a microphone to broadcast my voice.

Additionally

, ordering some Taiwanese snacks to treat audiences is another method to experience how delicious Asian cuisines taste. I look forward to hearing your feedback regarding my suggestions. Yours sincerely, Claire Chen

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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Write a letter to a community college in America which invited you to talk about your country. In your letter Accept invitation and suggest preferable dates Tell them what your talks will be about And what equipment you require them to arrange

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all the societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

Today much of the food people eat get imported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

20.More and more plastic is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it?