In spite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case ? what can be done ?

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Food
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security is one of the major concerns of today's world. While there are tremendous modern farming technologies, some
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are still suffering
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. Population
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and distribution of
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are two main causes of
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problem.
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essay will address in detail those reasons and discuss some solutions. It is undeniable that
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of population and unevenly distributed
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harmful effects on different aspects of life including
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. Nowadays, about eight billion
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are living on planet Earth which is by far eight times the
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in the 18th century.
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, whatever the technological advance in agriculture, it will never provide
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for all. Not only that
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but
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the
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in
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which are different can negatively affect
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.
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, many
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in Africa lack high technologies to produce
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sufficient for their citizens while they have land to farm.
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, European
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can have the technology, but without enough land or appropriate weather conditions. While the two above causes are continuously increasing the feeding problem, two main solutions are present.
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, for the expanding population, efforts to reduce
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should be made including campaigns and to positively profit from that
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of
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in reclaiming new areas.
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, for
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, developed
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have a significant role in helping poor counties. They can supply developing
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with advancements and modern techniques in farming. By doing
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, they will benefit
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themselves and others to have sufficient
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. To conclude,
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is affected significantly by increasing
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's
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and
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lack, solutions are existing but
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cooperation between different
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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