You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to stay at a friend’s house for a short time as you are visiting his/her city and don’t want to stay in a hotel. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Request to stay at your friend’s house • Explain why you would like to stay • offer your friend some kind of remuneration for letting you stay. Write at least 150 words.

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Hi John, Hope you are doing well. As you know, I'm migrating to

Canada

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month and am writing to get a huge favour from you. I got the visa and the ticket to travel to

Canada

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but I don'

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have a place to stay, the tickets came at the

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minute and I couldn'

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find proper accommodation within a short span of time.

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, I contacted one of the real estate agents living in the Ontario region. He suggested a few locations ,

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, I'm not satisfied with his suggestions. Some houses look cheap and they are old. I didn'

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want to commit myself to any of these apartments without seeing them in person.

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, I would like to stay at your place for a short period of time until I find a suitable place. I don'

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want to stay in a hotel as it's so expensive and I don'

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have a job at the moment. I will have to visit

Canada

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and start looking for a job.

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, I can pay some amount of money as I can understand the high cost of living in

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, and you may incur some additional costs due to my stay. Looking forward to receiving your response soon. Warm wishes, Kyle

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

209 words

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