You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: • say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, The purpose of

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letter is to express my disagreement with your

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week’s article in The Canadian Times about the

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centres of Canada. I agree that the interior plan and the placement of stores are standard throughout the country.

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, I do not agree that they all look the same in general. Traditionally, the

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of Mississauga stands taller,

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it is popular for the celebration square located right adjacent to it.

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combination makes it the busiest place of all the centres. Our

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is unique from others because it has the most hybrid visitors from all over the world.

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, you will not find the variety of cuisines as diverse as in our

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anywhere.

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, our

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has been awarded for the best kid’s entertainment across the country. I believe that you are not well acquainted with our

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that we all have a predilection for. I would be ecstatic if you could visit Mississauga someday. It would be a great pleasure if you give me a chance to vouchsafe a tour. Please let me know

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your thoughts. Yours Faithfully, Ruchi Shah

ruchishah0Wed Nov 16 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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198 words

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